Nov. 28th, 2009

thewarbingminstrel: (Firefly)
So here is episode four of my firefly fanfic. This one is shorter than the others, and I made a few changes.

- I am thickening Vanya's accent. I hope it is not too hard to read. If it is, I will go back to having the accent be implied. But I'm experimenting here. Hopefully that leads to growing.

- I am doing my best to write from every character's point of view. This may take time, as I have to gradually get to the point where they all have more complex backgrounds. But as with other things, I am getting there.

- I did not edit this one too heavily, and no one had read it but me. I hope there are not too many errors, but I am trying to freshen my style. Something is taken away when I edit my stuff. That, and I was also a little overeager to post this one, since NaNoWriMo took up all of my November.

So let me know if you like it. Forgive any spelling errors, please, and enjoy!

And remember. Not Joss Whedon. Though, wouldn't that be sweet?

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