Oh man, I was hoping we'd get more of Zoe and Mal and stuff! I mean, I love your original characters to itty bitty pieces, but Mal's "Hey, no draggin’ Mal into this!" was perfect. And I like the thought of them older; it's kind of fun.
And you weren't kidding about the major wound! I really like that you're going to have Finn "rest" with the injury, since it's probably going to create some conflict both with how unused to babying her leg she is and how off it'll be to stay on a planet. I suspect trouble will find them regardless!
Anyway, kudos as always, and I can't wait to read more.
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Date: 2009-12-02 10:26 am (UTC)And you weren't kidding about the major wound! I really like that you're going to have Finn "rest" with the injury, since it's probably going to create some conflict both with how unused to babying her leg she is and how off it'll be to stay on a planet. I suspect trouble will find them regardless!
Anyway, kudos as always, and I can't wait to read more.